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I love you not

May 29, 2013
By emmagm BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
emmagm BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"What is the point of being alive if you don't at least try to do something remarkable?"


do not believe it
when they say "I love you,"
because they only love to love someone at all.



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emmagm BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2013 at 10:00 am
emmagm BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"What is the point of being alive if you don't at least try to do something remarkable?"

Thanks! That means a lot :) That's a good idea, I'll definitely think about it. 

on Jun. 1 2013 at 2:36 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! I really liked the title, it was really interesting. And I love the picture, it goes along with this very well. I enjoyed the simplicity of the poem. It's really nice and delicate. The use of dialogue is nice too. I think I would like to see this extended, you could include what led up to this. It'd be a cool poem. Great job.