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"To Make Up Your Own Ending Let Me Know Just How You Feel"

May 26, 2013
By Ms.Grossi PLATINUM, Malden, Massachusetts
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The world is spinning slowly.
Does it even spin at all?
Screaming in the darkness,
echoes in the hall.
So much and so little.
I cannot breathe at all.
I cannot bend or stand up straight.
Either way I’d only fall.
Let my melancholy burn,
running in the rain.
Mixes, twists, and almost churned.
I am not insane.

© Adam S., Williamsburg, KY

The author's comments:
I bases this poem off a song called "Blurry" by Puddle of Mudd. I don't know if I like how this ends though, so tell me what you think.
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