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The ONE

July 17, 2013
By Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
5 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best and most beautiful things must be felt with the heart.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Helen Keller


I'm the ONE in the back,
The ONE never seen,
but sometimes I want to be
The ONE seen.
I want to be
The ONE seen in the sun and be
The ONE you look at,
The ONE you promise you'll never let go.
The ONE that makes you late for practice and
The ONE that you get in trouble with,
The ONE you kiss in the dark and dream about all night.
Sometimes I want to be the ONE that holds your hand and never lets it go.
The ONE that cries with you and wipes away your tears.
The ONE that holds you up and cheers you on.
The ONE who when you fall picks you back up and carries you home.
The ONE that laughs at your horrible jokes and tells even worse ones.
The ONE with you at my window helping me down.
The ONE you love,
The ONE you hold.
Why can't it be me?
What will it take?
For me to be the ONE...


The author's comments:
I just kind of started writing this when I realized that I want to be the ONE to someone... O realize it isn't the best but it is what I want. :)

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on Aug. 1 2013 at 7:58 pm
LittleMissLostInParadise GOLD, Cumberland, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We live in a strange bubble&quot;<br /> -Brian Molko

Suds, I love this... :,) It speaks to me.

on Jul. 23 2013 at 1:31 pm
Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
5 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best and most beautiful things must be felt with the heart.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Helen Keller

Thank you :)   

on Jul. 23 2013 at 1:31 pm
Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
5 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best and most beautiful things must be felt with the heart.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Helen Keller

Thanks I realized that but not until after I submitted it thanks though. :)

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on Jul. 23 2013 at 1:26 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?&quot; -Favourite poem ever&hearts;

I like how you emphasized the ONE. It's very enticing. You just might need to re-read it and see where you need to work on things. The way it flows is off... I can't really help much else. But I like it.

on Jul. 23 2013 at 1:13 pm
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
10 articles 2 photos 55 comments
that was so romance I think I going to cry