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Surrender
August 6, 2013
Surrender now your bottles
Broken only at their lips
Resort to sobered monotone
To let me know your mouth is shattered, too
© Steve S., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 4 comments.
OldYoungOne said...
on Aug. 12 2013 at 12:51 pm
I agree that this poem in particular did not meet up to the theme you have just discribed.
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 5:41 pm
First off, thank you so much for taking the time to read this and offer your opinion on it. :) I can understand how the poem might come across as vague, and perhaps a different title would help with that. Mainly, I was trying to convey the complicated nature of alcoholics, and how it sometimes seems as if they are more 'themselves' when they are drunk. However, I may not have been successful in doing so. :P
midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 12:20 pm
Does this convers about being sober or something else. Perfect picture but I would have named it "Surrender Your broken bottles"
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