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If Only

August 13, 2013
By JaycobA. GOLD, Lebanon OR., Oregon
JaycobA. GOLD, Lebanon OR., Oregon
18 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
No one alive can tell you that you are wrong for loving who you love. Regardless of if they are the same or a different gender. Love is love no matter what form it's in.


If only you could see how amazing you were.

If only I could see what she was hiding from everyone.

If only someone could have convinced you that life was worth living.

If only I could take back every word I didn't mean.

If only you knew how many people cared.

If only I had taken your words seriously.

If only I hadn't relized to late.

If only you where still here.

If only you hadn't gone away.

If only I said don't do it.

If only I said I care.



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JaycobA. GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2013 at 10:33 pm
JaycobA. GOLD, Lebanon OR., Oregon
18 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
No one alive can tell you that you are wrong for loving who you love. Regardless of if they are the same or a different gender. Love is love no matter what form it's in.

Thanks for saying I inspire people that's really all i want to do with my writing.  

on Aug. 14 2013 at 12:59 pm
Poetrylover_1 SILVER, Norh Charleston, South Carolina
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The structure of this poem is great. But in my opinion you shouldnt have used if only on every line. Other than that, it was amazing i felt it, because we as people sometimes dont hink that people care. People caring about you is very important no matter how much you say it doeant. continue to inspire others through your writing <3.