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Acceptance
October 19, 2013
The sun goes up
and the sun goes down,
and we watch it go
and we let it go.
We let everything go,
we have no choice--
we just watch it go--
and sometimes
there is no "good-bye."
© Jovee B., Dededo, Guam
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StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 11 2013 at 7:06 pm
I like the simplicity of this poem, and I think the meaning comes across quite clearly. Good work! :)
I like this poem. It has a deeper meaning behind the simple text. I love when poetry does that! However, I would have personally added something more about the similarities between the sun going down and someone leaving. Otherwise, I think it's perfect! :D
I REALLY like the poem and the idea! The repetition of words really makes it meaningful (though you need to capitalize each word at the begining of each line). My only suggestion is that it would be nice to see a more descriptive stanza before that one. Or it could be cool if you started with that stanza you wrote, then wrote a really descriptive stanza and then ended with your begining stanza. That could be cool.
TheCapturedBat GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2013 at 3:26 pm
Sad, lovely, and meaningful
SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2013 at 4:11 pm
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2013 at 4:10 pm
Glad you can relate. Thanks for the comment! C:
broken123456789 SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2013 at 4:07 pm
i really liked your poem
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