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the lost girl

October 24, 2013
By jacey_poo BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
jacey_poo BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
never judge a book by its cover

i left my phone on the counter and stared at it, wondering if he will ever tell me lies again, wondering will he ever come and see me.. why should he, all i ever get is the feeling of blue. i could never get him out of my mind until he fades standing outside the lines and it wont be good because he wont ever see me again until i tell him he is worth getting another shot and it wont be soon... doors close and open waiting for the opportunity but it never comes i will hurt the day that it comes

The author's comments:
what inspired me was i was left and never thought of and then a month or so later i was remembered and i was debating wheather to be taken back but i chose to close that door and then open it but i finally closed it and waited to see if another day like that will come

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This was swesome! Write some more please!

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on Apr. 19 2014 at 2:39 pm
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on Apr. 18 2014 at 10:36 pm
IndieChick10 BRONZE, Berkeley Springs, West Virginia
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Nice wright chica!  

on Apr. 17 2014 at 8:45 pm
themajesticpoet BRONZE, Bloomington, Other
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This is really good!  I love the feeling in it and how the emotion changes is great....  Keep up the writing!!!

on Apr. 17 2014 at 8:42 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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I Liked it.     Whats it about?     It really Shook at my heart.         Good Work.             Keep Writing.