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Tears

November 10, 2013
By Itsbeenalongday SILVER, Hendersonville, North Carolina
Itsbeenalongday SILVER, Hendersonville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time!


Sparkling, glimmering, diamond drop
My cup feels so heavy it’s filled to the
Top.

Breaking heart, heaving chest
Deep emotions my tears
Attest.

Rolling down my cheek they fall
A signal for help, a silent
Call.



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SCSKATE SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 8:09 pm
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Really good poem. The rhyming scheme seems to flow really naturally!

on Dec. 1 2013 at 1:15 pm
feychild21 BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"What you do makes a difference, and it's up to you to decide what kind of difference you're going to make" - Jane Goodall

I really enjoy this poem (thanks for commenting on mine)!! The second stanza really gives the reader a feel for the physical despair that this person is feeling.