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but yet I'm still here

November 18, 2013
By Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
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"is oxygen a gas?" brought to us by my friend the blonde.

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she feels alone
but yet I stand right here

she says no one cares
but yet I stick around

she wants to die because no one will miss her
but yet she is the first thing on my mind

here I am you fool open your eyes
but she lays there because she was blind to me

© Nicole B., Newcastle, WA

The author's comments:
no one should have to fear that some one they care about might not live through the night. no one should have to hope that they did enough for that person to feel loved. there is to much suffering in the world, and if that person leaves she will only add to the suffering
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poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 10:11 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Thank you! I'm going to post some new things soon! I haven't been on teen ink for ages, and all the writing is over a year old now! i really like your work too! :)
Dr.FeelGood GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 11:49 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
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well thanks :) oh and i like your stuff
poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2013 at 9:28 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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In wise I meant relatable, and the description of your poem holds information I think should be spread to more people.
Dr.FeelGood GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2013 at 11:46 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
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thanks  but its not wise at all its just painful
poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2013 at 6:44 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Wise words!