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What is our thoughts without feelings?

December 17, 2013
By KassandraThough GOLD, Bridgeport, Texas
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"I will destroy you in the most beautiful way possible and when im finished, you will finally understand why storms are named after people."

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My head is in the clouds
But I cant find my feet.
My words are running out
but I cant seem to stop talking.
Because we live in a world
where I love you
means nothing
and goodbye means everything
and people you know
become people you knew.

© Moselle S., Le Claire, IA

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Shahrier PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2014 at 11:39 pm
Shahrier PLATINUM, Colma, California
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&quot;I&#039;m a river that no longer flows&quot; - a friend<br /> &quot;when the people lead, leaders follow&quot; - Gandhi

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2nd line, "but" should be "and" truthfully, the title really drew me in, and the poem has an amazing premis, but to me, it feels like its poorly written. i think you can do better. try focusing on rhythm, and how it flows out of your mouth as you read it out loud. best poems in my opinion flows really well. over all, it was a good poem, and i can relate to it tremendously.