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Dear God,

December 24, 2013
By Damien_Wayne BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
Damien_Wayne BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
It is forbidden to kill; therefore, murders are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets.


Dear God,
Maybe one day I’ll see you, maybe I’ll be another of your angels in heaven.
I know how you love us all and all, but sometimes I just can’t believe that,
and no matter how I try I can’t.
I want to be closer to you,
but the plain and simple fact is that I might be going to hell.
I’ll pack my bags and head for the gates,
and half way there you’ll turn me around and hug me while I cry.
And maybe by then I can actually feel something,
fear, pain, love, anything.
I think you have it, those emotions that I lack God.
Just give them to me already.
I won’t abuse them like I thought I would.



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on Jun. 24 2014 at 8:33 am
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Its pretty good...you should write some more :)

.king. SILVER said...
on May. 22 2014 at 12:12 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Sweet, faith mixed with a little pessimism... different, but unique. Keep up the good work! :)

on Apr. 4 2014 at 10:25 am
KkatKreationz PLATINUM, Minerva, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken.&quot; :) <br /> -Me.

OMigosh! I totally love it. Keep it up! 

on Jan. 17 2014 at 3:25 pm
PrinceLion GOLD, Oxnard, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you find a diamond, try to break it.&quot; ~ Prince

It is a nice poem.  do you have an email? I am a trusted person, and I have a few questions about the poem if you don't mind answering them :) Thank you ~ Prince Lion (The Guardian Angel)