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Ovals and Other Besmirched Things MAG

February 26, 2014
By j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."


Thirty-three sunflowers danced with an
elephant in the dusks of Africa with
amazing gusts of wind and the fascination of: a triangle.

Hello my colorful, wonderful friends, I am light blue king of the trends, I am in the sky, hair dye, and fruit fly.
Although I can be excessively, utterly,
crazily, shy.

Behold, amazing is the oval
Not angular but mellow, an evolved circle.
A questionable gift like a snowflake
or rubble
An underrated shape like a line or a circle
An underused talent like a door or some purple
Or a misunderstood personality, like myself or a person in trouble.

I am a hyena, laughing at my predators, howling at my prey,
I stalk the streets and
YELL
what I say.


The author's comments:

This poem is explaining components that make me the person that I am. So read carefully and analyze well.


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j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2014 at 1:01 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."

Thanks for the compliment!

on Mar. 4 2014 at 9:11 pm
HannaHarris GOLD, Houston, Texas
11 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've got 40 ridiculous ideas every single second and I intend to express them all." -Ezra Miller

I like this poem a lot. I really enjoyed the geometric bit being woven into a larger picture.

j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 4 2014 at 2:43 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention."

Thanks so much!

on Mar. 3 2014 at 6:45 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

I loive it... You certainly do deserve the award

on Mar. 3 2014 at 6:41 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Paper is more patient than people.&quot; &ndash;Anne Frank

Fantastic! It is unlike any poem I have ever read. I love the metaphors and how seamlessly you incorporated imagery and sensory details. 5/5!!!!!

j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 6:29 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention.&quot;

Thanks! That means alot!

on Mar. 3 2014 at 5:42 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

This is such a unique and brilliantly written piece of poetry! I loved it. 5/5 stars

on Mar. 3 2014 at 3:43 pm
Shadow_Wolf GOLD, Mayfield Heigts, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart.&quot;<br /> &quot;You see not with your eyes, But with your heart.&quot;<br /> &quot;Think first with your heart not your head.&quot;<br /> &quot;If it has a heart, It is human.&quot;

I love this poem, very strong and powerful.... GOOD JOB!

j_smith SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 3:16 pm
j_smith SILVER, Cary, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; If you wanna be somebody, if you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake up and pay attention.&quot;

Great Poem! You really have talent!