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A Cannibal In Love MAG

November 16, 2008
By ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

I want to make a feast out of you
your fat swollen chops would be great
nourishment for my lovesick mind
your savory lips pack the flaky crunch
that goes
perfectly with crimson molasses like my
dear honey bear draining the life out of its belly
oh yes! the belly!
my tongue yearns for medium rare sausages …
your tubular will do perfectly
fillets off your midsection
still fresh and perfect for sushi
won’t you say?
I can’t wait to get a bite out of you and
won’t you want a piece of me too?


The author's comments:
Ehh...I've gotten various reviews on this one and they have been quite diverse in opinions, haha...Enjoy!

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Polythene GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:45 am
Polythene GOLD, St.petersburg, Florida
15 articles 17 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see."

your not alone  i have also written about cannibalistic love.

i really relished this piece though.


zobug96 said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:57 am
this poem is ver deep and misterious i love it i can totally see the meaning behind this poem

on Jun. 1 2010 at 9:02 pm
DepartedxDestinies GOLD, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Que sera, sera (What will be, will be)

I LOVE it! Its sooo unique and descriptive. Its beautiful and vulgar in its own mellowed out way!

on Jun. 1 2010 at 7:11 pm
olympian-queen, Charleston, South Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is history. Tommorrow is a mystery. And today? Today is a gift that's why they call it the present.

the description is okay but the poem is rather weird dontcha think?

on May. 20 2010 at 12:26 pm
CuffedUpQueen, Harriman, Tennessee
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this is AWESOME!!! yew r gr8

on May. 20 2010 at 12:21 pm
AngelBaby94 GOLD, Kingston, Tennessee
15 articles 8 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
An Eye For An Eye Will Only Make The World Blind

Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the space between the notes and curl my back to loneliness.- Maya Angelou

Words mean more than what is set down on paper. It takes the human voice to infuse them with deeper meaning. Maya Angelou

Awesomee. I Loved This.

chills said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:52 am
chills, Danbury, Connecticut
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Great imagery! Your descriptions are vivid!

on Apr. 3 2010 at 3:59 pm
sarahsinginrain SILVER, Setauket, New York
8 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Art, in itself, is an attempt to bring order out of chaos."-Stephan Sodeim

It's like you don't want to read it to long. It'll scare you. But at the same time it's a beautifully written poem. I loved it :)

on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:28 pm
spitfire213 SILVER, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the devil's den i may be, so stab my heart and set me free.

Your piece is very fascinating in a disturbing kind of way, depending on how you interpret it. I'm going to hope your not a cannibal, but if you are please get help. lol. Very mind stretching. Keep up the good work!

on Mar. 26 2010 at 1:21 pm
Mz.Bryennie BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
uqh! you annoy me but ilove you

dudee lol ilike everything u write u are VERY creative

on Mar. 23 2010 at 6:04 pm
Taylor-pop SILVER, Mole Creek, Other
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Real friends are like diamonds true and rare.
Fake friends are like autumn leaves found everywhere.

Um i really freaked out!! um and scraed at the same time can anyone say HeLp!

on Mar. 19 2010 at 10:28 pm
aStrelly SILVER, Moses Lake, Washington
6 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dignity does not consist in possessing honours, but in deserving them." -Aristotle
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent."-Eleanor Roosevelt

Hmm very unique and invigoring. I love it.

on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:39 pm
Im scared...that is pretty weird

holycrackers said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:03 pm
oh okay it's defferent and qiute honest maybe(i'm not sure) but i like it none the less.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 7:52 pm
Anique_ThePoet GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
10 articles 33 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer should write with his eyes and painter paint with his ears." ~Gertrude Stein~

its creative and unique i loved it!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:15 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

uhhh were u watching Hannibal at the time?? lol good job keep it up

checkk out my workk plz??

on Feb. 11 2010 at 12:51 pm
Karma_Chameleon SILVER, English, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 236 comments

Favorite Quote:
To be able to say "I love you" one must first be able to say "I" - Ayn Rand

Very different, but not bad! Keep it up!

Emily:) said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 6:27 pm
Uhhhh...........

on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:53 pm
(:Sweetkisses<3 BRONZE, Denton, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
live your life with no regrets

weeeriddd:) what inspired you to write something like this?!? it`s really gud...keep it up!

on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:51 pm
(:Sweetkisses<3 BRONZE, Denton, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
live your life with no regrets

wwooooowwww!!!!!:) i lovvve it really GUD. and to tell you the truth its sexy in a verry weird/good way. keep it up!