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Why do i try

May 15, 2014
By Necromancer PLATINUM, Cedar Creek, Texas
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Hatred burning
Fists flying through the air
Is there no end?

The fights never stop
The screaming never end
Why do i even try?

© Megan M., Rives Jct., MI

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 15 2014 at 3:08 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Maybe because we are meant to try. Maybe the the screaming will never end and the fights wil never end too. I don't know, to be honest. But there's always hope, and somehow and somewhere deep down inside us, we try.   Your poem is amazing, filled with emotion. You pur yourself into it, when you wrote it. Your poem is powerful. Thank you for sharing this! I love it. 
Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Sep. 12 2014 at 10:21 am
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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great poem, its so true we all ten to ask our selves that same question "why do i try" coz somtimes it just feel like we should give up. great work dude. i like this poem, I bet a lot of people can relate to this especially since it is grounded on fights which i am sure that majority of use have either been in them or witnessed them in some way. great job ! keep up the good work