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May 19, 2014
By LovelyDeath PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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&quot;Some say the world will end in fire,<br /> Some say in ice.<br /> From what I&#039;ve tasted of desire<br /> I hold with those who favor fire.<br /> But if it had to perish twice,<br /> I think I know enough of hate<br /> To say that for destruction ice<br /> Is also great<br /> And would suffice.&quot;

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The pain in which I
In afflicted myself

Has gone to hurt
The one I love

Though that pain kills me
More than it hurts him

I know in not well
I know I’m a bad influence

I died
The moment

I saw
What I saw

I thought
It was an accident

I was so confused
I had no clue

What was going on?
What happened?
What went wrong?

My heart stopped
I wanted to end it

I wanted to end it
Right there and then

I couldn’t even breathe
The air heavy

I wanted to end it
Didn’t

I love him
I can’t
My word
My life
Relies in him

He has my heart
He has mine
I’m not giving it back

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

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