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Who Did This?

June 5, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Don’t you look at me, you’re just a quick start.
Your hair is so grungy, and you speak from your heart.

You’re never gonna make it you literary freak,
There’s no room for you here, no one cares geek!

Your poems are dark, boring and too long.
You use words, no meaning just wrong.

Why do you sit by yourself, reading at lunch?
Why do you stand up with a painful hunch?

Why do you scramble when I push your books?
Is there really a problem with dirty looks?

Why don’t you listen when I call you names?
Why won’t you play my mean games?

You’ve turned cold, no warmth in your eyes.
I’ve seen this before; how a person dies.

You no longer try to seek help anymore.
Your speeches are short, don’t cut to the core.

Your teachers are frightened, unsure of you now,
what has happened, and why was it? How?

Your heart will not let go of hurtful words.
Get over it, go sing with the birds!

But you never have smiled. not for a while.
I can’t help but see and look to the tile.

It can’t be me who made you this way.
You know Rome wasn’t built in a day.

But the facts are laid out, plain as can be.
I know who did this, and it was me.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Aug. 7 2014 at 11:15 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thanks, and the poem could go both ways :) I am glad you figured it out, most people don't lol Thanks for reading this, It means a lot! XD
midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 7:10 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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&quot;We accept the love we think we deserve.&quot; -Stephen Chbosky

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Talk about a turn in tables, I did not expect the ending! I thought it was a bully telling you your problems, not talking to yourself! We have unexpected, but a good writing suprise 2nd person writing here :>
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2014 at 1:45 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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sure can! And thank you so much. This poem is kind of about being bullied into depression, and when you're depressed, you don't really...function. And I imagine that if I couldn't function, I couldn't write. :) Thx! XD
TevyRae PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 6:46 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

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&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik

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Also, can you check out some of my work? i'd really appreciate the feedback. Thank  you! 
TevyRae PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 6:45 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik

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ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS.  it's so good. i can relate to it so easily- especially being a writer. we always put ourselves down more harshly than our worse critics.  Amazing job! 
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 18 2014 at 8:11 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank you so much! XD
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 18 2014 at 6:57 pm
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
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For you, a thousand times over.

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This poem is so relatable, me also being a writer. I always doubt my ability and sometimes even consider stopping all together.  This peom is perfectly written and brilliantly conveys that feeling. I also really like the ending! great job!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 16 2014 at 5:41 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thanks! XD
bella-nielsen GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2014 at 10:23 am
bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
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&quot;autism isn&#039;t contagious, but a smile is and that&#039;s what im afraid of.&quot;-grumpy cat

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omg! i love it!  its great
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 15 2014 at 3:57 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank you sooo much! XD
AlwaysInBeastMode GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2014 at 1:55 pm
AlwaysInBeastMode GOLD, Suitland, Maryland
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Your work is going to fill a large part of your life, and the only way to be truly satisfied is to do what you believe is great work. And the only way to do great work is to love what you do. If you haven&#039;t found it yet, keep looking. Don&#039;t settle.

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This Is fanstic I felt like you were talking directly to me because I can relate to this :D You are an amazing, outstanding, unique, fanstic, and talented AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!  KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 14 2014 at 6:46 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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yeah, I tried to write this from a bully's point of view instead of mine. I thought it would turn out bad, but it's okay. :)
ChasityTaylor said...
on Jun. 13 2014 at 2:22 pm
This is great. Sometimes how I feel. And that is defanantly me reading my book at lunch! :)
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2014 at 12:31 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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A smile hides everything.

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You're welcome :)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 7:29 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thanks! I really appreciate it. :-)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 7:28 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank you! :)
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 4:00 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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This is really good! Great job! :)
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 1:02 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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A smile hides everything.

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Its totally amazing...good work :)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 12:16 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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thanks! I love to connect with my readers. :)
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 11 2014 at 8:49 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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awesome job, sometimes how i feel