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My Sorrow's Summary

June 15, 2014
By Z.V.Oksana PLATINUM, Harrison, Arkansas
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Z.V.Oksana PLATINUM, Harrison, Arkansas
22 articles 1 photo 60 comments

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“Maybe you can afford to wait. Maybe for you there's a tomorrow. Maybe for you there's one thousand tomorrows, or three thousand, or ten, so much time you can bathe in it, roll around it, let it slide like coins through you fingers. So much time you can waste it.
But for some of us there's only today. And the truth is, you never really know.”
― Lauren Oliver, Before I Fall

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When I trust in myself,
I'm polarly wrong.
Each winding turn
Is tremendously long.
Proficient in humiliation,
Subject to guilt.
Bridges crumble
With lies I've built.

© Marina S., Vineyard Haven, MA

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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 5 2015 at 1:15 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Very well written with good rhymes. I like your meter and the length of the poem, it feels perfect. Good job!
SabrinaFaire SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 5:21 pm
SabrinaFaire SILVER, Odenville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"You aren't going to impose the patriarchal paradigm on ME." Alaska Young

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I felt the numb connection! Love it! 5/5
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 5 2014 at 11:44 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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More real than solid earth;
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This is great! You're an excellent writer. :)
WritinGirl PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2014 at 1:38 pm
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
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good job, flowed really well. 
JRaye PLATINUM said...
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This is really good:) Short and sweet,  flowed very nicely, and super relatable! I liked it a lot!