Thought Of Falling In Love

October 10, 2014

By GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other

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The thought of falling in love is always Killing!

As it sometimes hurt my sweet feelings.

Falling in love for me is tough,

With a person who is more than rough.

But falling in love sometimes makes me smile,

As it makes my feet fly high in the sky.

The person with whom I'm gonna Fall in love,

Is going to be someone with a heart like a Dove.

Though thought of falling in love is not so good,

Yet it could fill my belly without any food.

When I will fall in love,

The whole world will watch, for i'm so tough.

But if I ever get deceived in love,

I would give up my thought of falling in love.

The author's comments:

Written from beneath my HEART!!!!!!

This article has 6 comments.

PLATINUM said...

on Dec. 12 2014 at 9:58 am

Not every poem needs to be deep. This one is very honest, and simple. I liked it, thanks for sharing this.

said...

on Oct. 26 2014 at 2:39 pm

I love this poem, i think love makes me want to fly in the sky too. Good job you nailed this poem.

GOLD said...

on Oct. 16 2014 at 2:42 pm

Thanks! @promethen I will try to work batter on my other poem and I am quite upeat about, that you'll like them! :)

SILVER said...

on Oct. 16 2014 at 10:31 am

lot of improvement is required. usage of words isn't quite good. 3/5

BRONZE said...

on Oct. 14 2014 at 1:57 pm

oh wow nice poem! kinda relatable but i love it :-D . nice job

said...

on Oct. 14 2014 at 1:54 pm

Nice!!