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October 8, 2014
By lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
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lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
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screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

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I see pain
Suffering
And choices left unchosen

I see tears
Destruction
Words left unspoken

I just want to help
Save you from yourself
Keep you forever

You smile through the pain
Trying to see sun through the rain
Thinking tour worthless
When you’re everything to me

I can’t let you be
You may not ever see
But I will always trust you
And I will never forget you

© Catherine R., Phoenix, AZ

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lastingbreath16 DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 25 2015 at 1:13 pm
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

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Thank you for that!!!
Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2015 at 9:20 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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I like this one a lot! great job penning your thoughts and putting so much emotion and passion into your work!
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 16 2014 at 12:51 pm
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

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screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

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Thank you so much I'm really happy you liked the poem!
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 16 2014 at 12:50 pm
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

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screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

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Thank you so much! 
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 16 2014 at 12:49 pm
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

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screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

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Thank you and yes you are right about that i should have checked it a third time thank you for pointing that out and sorry i didn't catch that.
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 14 2014 at 11:37 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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This is beautiful and amazing. It's so raw and filled with emotion and depth. It's just amazing. You really have a lot of talent and greatness in you. You're an amazing and talented writer. Haha, it's true. :) Thank you so much, for sharing this. 
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 14 2014 at 11:09 am
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Very impressive... I can feel the deep feelings and I can so easily relate to it. It was so beautiful and yet sad in some way. Short but so meaningful and strong. It simply says it all. I love it. Keep up the great work cuz you're really talented ^_^ Thank you so much for sharing this.
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 14 2014 at 7:20 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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I can see the feelings involved behind the poem, and I love some of your simple phrases. I like the length, too. But isn't the word supposed to be 'you're' in 'Thinking tour worthless'?