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Sweet Guilt

November 7, 2014
By EllenMC GOLD, Boulder, Colorado
EllenMC GOLD, Boulder, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Excerpt from Calvin and Hobbes:<br /> Calvin asks Mom: &quot;Why are you crying?&quot;<br /> Mom: &quot;I&#039;m cutting an onion.&quot;<br /> Calvin: &quot;Life must be hard when you start anthropomorphizing your vegetables.&quot;


I have a secret stash of chocolate in my room
Like the sweet guilt that lies in the corners of my soul
No one would guess of my surrender to decadence
This small luxury defying my otherwise strict self-control

Craving eventually clouds judgement
Sometimes it feels good to let go
Reason eclipsed by appetite
For a while gives one’s insides a glow

Until reality opens the door
And sheds light on the perils of such succumbing
Embarrassment, even for so paltry a crime
Certainly keeps life humbling

These pieces of myself I would rather keep in the dark
Where no one else can see
They serve as a reminder of my weakness
My human frailty



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KylieK GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2014 at 12:20 pm
KylieK GOLD, Mt. Washington, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To love is to surpass one&#039;s self.&quot;

Beautiful!

on Nov. 10 2014 at 9:11 pm
PianoKeys97 PLATINUM, Medford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can be the ripest, juiciest peach in the world, and there&#039;s still going to be somebody who hates peaches.&quot; -Dita Von Teese

I love your poem and the rhyming scheme you have going. I find it facinating how you compare your "sweet guilt" to a box of chocolates hidden in your room, a truly relatable action. Your poem reminds us how we all have those craving that cloud judgment and how it's sometimes easier to just give in. Your poem reminds us that we're all just human.

on Nov. 10 2014 at 7:18 pm
monkeyluvs2write GOLD, Falls Church, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;What man calls civilization always results in deserts. Man is never on the square &ndash; he uses up the fat and greenery of the earth. Each generation wastes a little more of the future with greed and lust for riches.&rdquo; -- Don Marquis

I love writing poetry and I love reading it even more, and even now, it amazes me how good poems seem to use exactly the perfect words to describe what the poem is about. Love your poem, I can sense the vulnerability of it and that's what makes it human.