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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Aug. 16 2011 at 7:46 pm
aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

This was phenomenal, absolutely flawless. You are a very talented poet, I really love this piece. :)

on Aug. 15 2011 at 4:20 pm
Dreamscape7 SILVER, Ada, Oklahoma
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"To admit you are wrong is to admit you are wiser now then ever before." -?

That was amazing! I lost my mom too. Alcoholism, and "other" things took her out of my life and I felt like it just grabbed at me. Wish I could have come up with it. Definately going to have to check out your other writings.

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on Aug. 13 2011 at 10:56 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

Soooo beautiful! Wish I could think and write like you...

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on Aug. 10 2011 at 11:37 am
AMJaeh DIAMOND, Gallatin, Tennessee
51 articles 80 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
you don't have to understand the language to know its Poetik written Muzyk~PoetikMuzyk
Not Everything is ours to keep, no matter how hard we had to fight for it~PoetikMuzyk
‎"The face of my enemy only frightens me when I see how much it resembles mine"
- Stanislaw J. Lec

a few neurons can make us all a morons dont you think?

brought tears to my eyes....

on Aug. 4 2011 at 9:58 pm
Danealle SILVER, Wheeling, Illinois
7 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anything is possible with a smile and goal in mind.

I LOVE this! My father died last year so I understand what you went through/are going through. 

I wrote a book about my father called "even Though." Read and let me know what you think :)


on Aug. 4 2011 at 7:56 pm
Alex_Durham GOLD, Vineland, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 234 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

This was so beautiful... great work!!!!

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on Aug. 4 2011 at 7:55 pm
Chalaza SILVER, Woodstock, New York
7 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I lived to write, and wrote to live." ~Samuel Rogers

This is so beautiful. One of the most well written, well conveyed pieces of writing I've ever read. 

on Aug. 4 2011 at 6:24 pm
maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Don't carry life. Let life, carry you."
- Me

this was just flat out beautiful c: so deep and really touching...... if you wouldnt mind checking out my stuff i'd love your input <3

on Aug. 4 2011 at 5:40 pm
RhythmAndRhyme BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's no half-singing in the shower, you're either a rock star or an opera diva." ~~Josh Groban

This is such a bittersweet poem! It's so sad. I had tears welling up in my eyes the whole time. I would be absolutely heartbroken if my mother was taken away from me....

on Aug. 4 2011 at 4:33 pm
thecape196 BRONZE, Oviedo, Florida
4 articles 9 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem with not having a goal is you can spend your life running up and down the field and never score

This was SUCH a well written poem. I could really feel the emotion! If u have time could you look at some of mine?

on Aug. 4 2011 at 3:41 pm
foreverme BRONZE, Williamston, Michigan
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so sad...            

on Aug. 4 2011 at 12:41 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

absolutely amazing.

on Aug. 4 2011 at 10:36 am
palalandrea GOLD, New York, New York
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
With victory comes sorrow

This was very heartfelt. I really felt your pain. Beautiful poem.

on Aug. 4 2011 at 8:07 am
purplequeen BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Aww.. thats really pretty.

Hey can you guys comment on my poems and I will comment on yours.


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on Aug. 4 2011 at 5:24 am
GaelicC, Longford, Other
0 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
No -Rosa Parks

I'll be honest i'm not usually that interested in poetry, but this is really good and it's poems like these that really grab my attention. Well done, sad but well written:)

on Aug. 4 2011 at 2:12 am
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
10 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

I know how you feel. i havne't lost my mom, but i've lost almost everyone else. and i don't even talk to my mom that much. i really, really hope that this isn't based on what really happened to you. i don't wish that sorrow upon my worst enemies. but this was really great and so true. i hope that you keep writing stuff like this. this poetry needs to be on here more often.

Angie123 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 8:40 pm
Angie123 GOLD, Madison, Alabama
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Keep on going and don't give up"

This artical is so true.. iknow how it feels to be lost in the world of seldom. You can never think of the pain someone is going threw untill it happenes to you .

on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:42 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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This is great! I love it!

on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:47 pm
devikaarora GOLD, New Delhi, Hawaii
17 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont tell me sky is the limit when there are footsteps on the moon !

THis actually made me cry!
i love you for this!

on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:43 pm
Julez1D1 BRONZE, Kingsport, Tennessee
1 article 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But unfortunatley all I have to give you is in imperfect heart, but it's a heart that beats only for you."

ah-greed!.