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Whiter than White

April 29, 2015
By Future-Best-Seller BRONZE, Sacramento, California
Future-Best-Seller BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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To live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong.


I lie down in the bed of fresh snowfall.

As the snow showers above me, everything slowly turns white.

As I look side to side, I see animals.

A white fox, glaring with big yellow eyes,

Has no intention to hurt me.

As it comes close, the less it blends in.

Now sitting beside me, very calm.

I take off my glove and feel its silky white fir.


The author's comments:

I wrote this poem in 5th grade. My mom loved this poem.


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on May. 11 2015 at 11:45 pm
Future-Best-Seller BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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To live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong.

It was supposed to say "fur" not "fir". THIS IS MY WORK

on May. 11 2015 at 11:17 pm
Future-Best-Seller BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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To live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong.

Sorry guys! My mom posted this poem!