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and I'm an alcoholic

August 25, 2015
By VM709 DIAMOND, Ormond Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" I will never be what you want from me "

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One more glass..

Just one more glass.

It won't hurt me.

It's only one more glass.

But one more glass 

Turns to a cellar a day

And you

You slowly start to waste away

© Louise T., Marblehead, MA

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zoe22 GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2015 at 8:44 pm
zoe22 GOLD, Vienna, Virginia
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&quot;A drop in the ocean, a change in the weather,&quot; Ron Pope

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Well written! You've really put yourself into the shoes of alcoholics with your excellent rhyme scheme and poem rhythm.