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Into My Heart

November 24, 2015
By BabySnickers15 SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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"I can accept failure, but I can't accept not trying" ~Michael Jordan~
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams" ~Franklin Delano Roosevelt~

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The blade goes deeper
Into my heart
As you watch me
You laugh at my pain
I wish it didnt hurt
I thought dying would be easy
But it is the hardest thing ever
I wish it was faster
But it only slows down
All I feel is pain
As the blade goes deeper
Into My Heart

© Brit H., Peabody, MA

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This piece was inspired by my ex boyfriend.

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BabySnickers15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2015 at 2:24 pm
BabySnickers15 SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failure, but I can't accept not trying" ~Michael Jordan~
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams" ~Franklin Delano Roosevelt~

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Thanks. I really appreciate it. It's actually my fave.
Queenbee316 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2015 at 2:21 pm
Queenbee316 BRONZE, Spanish Fork, Utah
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"I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on" ~David Archuleta

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WOW. ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW WOW WOW!!! I LOVE IT!!
BabySnickers15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2015 at 2:13 pm
BabySnickers15 SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failure, but I can't accept not trying" ~Michael Jordan~
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams" ~Franklin Delano Roosevelt~

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Thanks Goshawk. This one is my fave.
Goshawk BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2015 at 11:54 am
Goshawk BRONZE, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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"Lord, what fools these mortals be!" ~Puck, a Midsummer Night's Dream

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Wow. This is amazing.
BabySnickers15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2015 at 7:36 am
BabySnickers15 SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failure, but I can't accept not trying" ~Michael Jordan~
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams" ~Franklin Delano Roosevelt~

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Thanks, Thrillqueen. I really appreciate it.
ThrillQueen126 said...
on Nov. 25 2015 at 8:37 pm
ThrillQueen126, Seattle, Washington
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I love the line "I thought dying would be easy, but it is the hardest thing ever." Even though this poem is short, it manages to evoke so many emotions.
BabySnickers15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2015 at 7:07 pm
BabySnickers15 SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failure, but I can't accept not trying" ~Michael Jordan~
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams" ~Franklin Delano Roosevelt~

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Thank You Riley
riley_foxx said...
on Nov. 25 2015 at 5:34 pm
riley_foxx,
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Wow this is actually really good, even tho I know nothing of poetry. I love the last line and how you repeated the title
BabySnickers15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2015 at 2:56 pm
BabySnickers15 SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failure, but I can't accept not trying" ~Michael Jordan~
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams" ~Franklin Delano Roosevelt~

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Thanks. I really appreciate it.
CNBono17 SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2015 at 2:51 pm
CNBono17 SILVER, Rural, South Carolina
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How to describe this? Vivid imagery, evocative metaphor. Wow.