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Humanity's Lament

January 29, 2016
By NightBulb SILVER, Sudbury, Ontario
NightBulb SILVER, Sudbury, Ontario
7 articles 2 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a blank canvas: it's up to you to paint the picture.


Acid rain crashed on the glass of the East Side
Drenching us all in our lost hopes and shame
Gales and storms raging, and we were to blame
Yet we were the ones who lay cowering inside

And why did we think we could be so much
We thought we were leaders, then blinded by pride
We were nothing but dictators of the genetically modified
In a free-falling world that we thought we could clutch

Assuming control, we were born and we now die
Living off of destruction and self-inflicted pain
And unnecessary bloodshed, so our species could only wane
As we pretended to find new ways to help the victimized

But I shall rise and I shall shout to the dirtied skies
And the rusty ocean and sulfuric mountains will hear my cries
And I hope we will awaken to find that we were wrong
Because knowing we were monsters is the only way we’ll be strong.
 


The author's comments:

Problems with the environment. Difficulties within societies. Wars that ravage entire cities. Humans have caused so many troubles throughout the course of history, and it is time now for us to change.


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on Feb. 6 2016 at 9:44 pm
NightBulb SILVER, Sudbury, Ontario
7 articles 2 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a blank canvas: it's up to you to paint the picture.

Thanks! The general theme and feeling of the poem made sense in my head hahaha but what exactly do you mean by half fluent context?

on Feb. 3 2016 at 9:01 am
Dameon_Farris PLATINUM, Folton, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
"Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish on its ability to climb a tree. It will live its whole life believing that it is stupid." - Albert Eistiene

Great poem sure at first it was hard to follow but it has an solid ending and half fluent context great job altogether it's an excellent poem