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Ribbons of Thought
June 12, 2011
The ribbons of thought,
Twining into ideas,
Now become actions.
© Raymond G., Phoenix, AZ
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SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 12:08 pm
Thanks!
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 9:54 pm
I love how you convey such a deep emotion within three sentences of a haiku. AMAZING :)
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 1:45 pm
Thank you!
NorthernWriter said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:03 pm
very unique three lines, it's very complex yet simple and stated so profoundly. keep writing :)
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:28 pm
Thankie kindly!
Peacock said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:47 pm
Me likes... <3
Complex without seeming so, because of how it all ties together so simply!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
Thank you! Please check out my other stuff too!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
Thank you!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
Thanks for the feedback! I know I didn't think I was very good at writing haikus either!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
Thanks!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:07 pm
Thank you! That's what I thought when I wrote this!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:07 pm
Thanks!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:06 pm
Thank you!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 1:11 pm
Thank you both for the feedback!
TwasBrilling BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:37 am
I agree...most haikus dont seem to have a message, or train of thought, but this does!
Megan.J.B said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:36 pm
really amazing job! I usually hate haikus, but this one is suprisingly nice :)
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:51 am
Haikus are generally so unoriginal but this is amazing! Love it.
ArgonElement SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 8:40 am
It is so hard to write haikus! And even harder to write haikus that make sense! Haha (I am NOT a very good haiku writer) really great. :) Keep it up!
