Carnage | Teen Ink


March 12, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments

Outside my window
Night is murdering the sun.
Bloody red and orange.

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 22 2013 at 2:03 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Imagery is beautiful here.

on Mar. 22 2013 at 6:59 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

reallly beautiful imagery.. the last line has 6 syllables... haikus are supposed to be 5 7 5 patterned. other than that, great :)