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May 1, 2013
By Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Dissecting the clouds,
The white monstrosity madly
Swerves near the sky's orb.

© Erin T., Wichita, KS

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Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:23 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Thank you! :P
Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 1:30 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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creative, i like it.
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on May. 6 2013 at 2:49 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

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&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate that. ^_^
Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 6 2013 at 1:41 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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This is simply what haiku should be. I love how you captured the essence or the perpective of an airplane flying in the heavens. Very creative. And most of all very lovely. This is a 5 star haiku.