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Web_________

October 3, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments

Morning dew glistens
On a galaxy in the rafters
Spun by a spider.



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 7:26 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thank you so much.

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 12:37 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

This is incredible! You are just so good at haikus!!! :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 6:13 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

No prob. ^u^

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 5:59 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it :D

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 5:40 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

(Just in case my first post doesn't show up...) With a poem so small as this one, you were able to perfectly describe something grandiose. The image of the spider's web to some may seem insignificant; nonetheless you captured its beauty here. Congrats on yet another Editors' Choice.