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Moon's Face

November 17, 2013
By Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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The moon's face peaks out,
Yet it's shyness keeps it from
Showing its whole self.

© Claire E., Bethesda, MD

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poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 8 2013 at 2:56 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Very nice! If I was going to give chritical feedback I may ask you where the moon was peeking out from, but very sweet!
Blynn SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2013 at 10:48 pm
Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
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This is cute, good first haiku. 
Dals said...
on Nov. 29 2013 at 2:28 pm
Nice! Great interpretation!
dinks PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2013 at 9:38 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
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Love this, keep it up!