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November 5, 2010
By babynoel1225 GOLD, Mendon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
-You dont know what you have &#039;till its gone.<br /> -Sometimes giving up doesn&#039;t mean your weak sometimes it means your strong enough to let go. <br /> - Remember Patrick, licking doorknobs is illegal on other planets- Spongebob Squarepants.

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I’m a failure to this world
Oh why don’t you see?
Why would life choose this path for me?
All that I’ve gone through
What I’m trying to find
But everything has to hide
Why can’t this be easy?
Just for once
I can’t be any good
I get everything I don’t want.
Kill me; just help me out
I don’t want to start over
Not after I figured everything out.
Just bury me
End this pain
I’m no good
Look at these stains
From where I tried to feel something
Let some stuff out
But the more I fail
The more I cry
The more I cry the more I die.
And when I die
It will save a life.

© Julia R., Bethesda, MD

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When i get depressed i write poetry and this is one of the many works.
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sabrinaZ SILVER said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:29 pm
sabrinaZ SILVER, New York, New York
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I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they&#039;re right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good

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this is really good does it help when you write because when i do it thats what happens i feel better do you ?
Inlove4ever BRONZE said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 2:41 pm
Inlove4ever BRONZE, Haddenham, Other
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I have loved you forever and forever will!

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that's amazing! 

I am the same, when i am depressed i write poems, saying what I feel :(