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Insanity
May 19, 2011
Is it black? Is it white?
In the night, is it bright?
In the day, is it dark?
And the cats, do they bark?
Is it hot? Is it cold?
In her tale, what was told?
Did she say she can fly?
When she waves, is it bye?
Is it right? Is it wrong?
Do I read with a song?
Do I dance with a book?
Do I know where I look?
Is it good? Is it bad?
Does your mom love your dad?
When they walk, does she run?
Does she cure with a gun?
Now I feel so confused
And my mind felt abused
It is burning in he**
I cannot think so well!
It goes bad, it goes worse
Am I running like horse?
When will I figure out
What these things are about?
© Ashley W., Port Charlotte, FL
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This article has 11 comments.
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:12 pm
I like this poem alot. Itt's catchy and I could feel a rhythm come out of it as I read it. Your rhyming was great except for the second to last line or so. I enjoyed it very much and found it cute and quirky.
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 11:42 am
Wow, this is really good! I think that it really captured the feeling of insanity. :)
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:10 am
That was soooooooooooo good! Wow! Your rhyming was perfect! And I loved the comparsions and contrast! Soooo great! I love it!
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 11:03 pm
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Genius. I love poems like this.
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 4:07 am
not really. im kind of easily disheartened. so...
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:17 am
u sound like a carefree awesome creative writer who doesn't let anyone get in their way :P
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:57 am
Yo! My greatest dream ever is to be crazy. LOL :D
Glad you like it =))
Glad you like it =))
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:02 am
this is my favorite poem of yours it's original i really like it aren't we all crazy :P
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 4:12 am
Well, thanks.. And I was mentally thanking my teacher for being boring.. hahaha :)))
And oh, thanks for your comment/s.. :))
And oh, thanks for your comment/s.. :))
writerthinkerdreamer BRONZE said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 4:03 pm
For a product of boredom, it's really good! It's got an air of whimsical-ness that I like :)
