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The Eruption of Nate

September 17, 2014
By adrijg3 GOLD, Franklin, Ohio
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There once was a boy named Nate,

who ate and ate, until there was nothing left.

One particular night, Nate ate the whole table,

and it seemed that was all he was able.

For Nate swelled up like a balloon,

and exploded with a loud kaboom.

Parents live to tell the story,

to pudgy kids with glory,

if they ate like Nate, they would surely meet the same fate.

© Zamir A., Multan, Punjab, Pakistan

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adrijg3 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2014 at 8:19 am
adrijg3 GOLD, Franklin, Ohio
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Thank you! (:
dgeileen PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 8:35 pm
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Cute poem :D