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Who's To Blame?

September 21, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I feel like I'm losing you
You're slipping away
So far away, away from me
I don't know what to do
I didn't know it'll be this hard

You knew my intentions
You knew they were good
Agreeing with my views
You helped make the decision
But seems like everything

It's turning around
Falling apart
Don't make a sound
We're too scared
To change what we knew
Thought that we were
Doing the good
We don't know what to do
Now that everything's changed
Will we stay the same?
Who's to blame?

Follow through just do it
We're renewing our claims
Our problem's still the same
Hanging around just to see
How far this could go

How far till someone hurts
Pretending like nothing's change
We fall apart in this game
Feeling like we made a mistake
Either way this will stay

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This article has 44 comments.

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:39 pm
MaowMaddi BRONZE, Putney, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"...And it takes no time to fall in love, but it takes you years to know what love is. It takes some fears to make you trust. It takes those tears to make it rust. It takes the dust to have it polished.” -Jason Mraz.

I wrote something similar to this having to do with my family a couple of years ago. It was not as developed as your piece is though. Just wondering,where did you get your inspiration from?

on Dec. 29 2009 at 3:52 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thank you! I just posted 3 new ones but waiting from the approval from TeenInk staff :)

on Dec. 29 2009 at 12:56 pm
Lisette-Midnight SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Live for the moment you can't put in words.

WRITE MORE! I love this song. Write more for my Please.sake.

on Nov. 13 2009 at 3:01 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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hey i really like this song like alot alot i really wanna read more so keep writing