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To Lose You

January 6, 2010
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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A wave of sadness
Flows through me
I have lost all of you
Took me this long to see
You're so far gone
I can't even believe
The things that happened
And who you've come to be
Oh this is such a shame
To have you leave
I guess you'll never know
What you really mean to me

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Saphira96 SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:41 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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I have 3 but here they are:<br /> Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.<br /> Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

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Your very welcome! i love to help people and it was a pleasure!
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:40 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I really appreciate your encouraging comments! It's been a delight to hear what you think of my work :)
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:38 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thanks. This lyric is made for an acoustic type folk song...with many parts that consist of more intrumental rather than lyrical.
keilly GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:25 am
keilly GOLD, Springfield, Massachusetts
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i think it was very good but if it was a song i think it should be a little longer to have a climax and a resolution.
Saphira96 SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:08 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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I have 3 but here they are:<br /> Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.<br /> Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

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That was amazing! It made me feel emotional!