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Spin with me MAG
January 20, 2010
Spin and spin, hit me again.
The stars are fireflies,
I'm lost chasing them in your eyes.
Punch me, punch me.
The crash of the cymbals
The symphonic sounds
The timpani roll
Spin me 'round
Our bare feet pound the dirt.
Twirl with me, swirl with me
Spin and spin, hit me again.
Spin me, twist me
Tell me you love me
The trees whisper their shame
They don't know a thing.
I won't quit this game.
The crash of the cymbals
The symphonic sounds
The timpani roll
Stop.
© Meagan Y., Tigard, OR
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This article has 20 comments.
keshialovesmusic said...
on May. 13 2014 at 3:37 pm
dont understand song
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 23 2013 at 11:15 am
It's a cool song, has a good rhythm
magickMuse said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 3:33 pm
i really like this piece. wish there was more lyrics, and I really want to read more of your work:)
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND said...
on May. 26 2011 at 11:56 am
I really love this piece you've written. :)
ForgottenSomeHow PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 18 2011 at 2:52 pm
I Love It. In My Head It Sound Perfect. I Love It. Truely Do. The Ending Is Amazing. (:
SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 7:27 pm
Well is she on a merry-go-round thing like on the picture? maybe you could make her fall off and get bruised or something and relate that to how love can hurt or something?
SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 10:45 pm
I like the use of the word "symphonic!" C: but the ending seems a bit off to me.
baby_girla SILVER said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 9:47 pm
this is a great song I wish there was more because I love the way it sounded when I started to sing it and I sung it alot for you. thank you and you should write more songs because you are real awesome and that I love this one
Mr.Mills said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 8:13 am
hey great lyrics it was a real great song must have took a lot of thought.
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 4:23 pm
your welcome!
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:34 pm
Awesome work!!!
Hi! Very nice poem, I really appreciated reading it! I love the way you illustrated the feelings of bedazzlement, confusion, and thrill... Congratulations for getting published in the print magazine too! When is it coming out? My piece 'Cigarettes' will also get published in that edition! Can't wait for us to see it! Again, bravo!
aspiring.author.09 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 10:50 pm
I don't think you should change anything. It was just the right length - any shorter and I may not have gotten as clear of an image. The senses portrayed were vivid. I personally love when people end their poems with 'stop' when it fits, and it did fit in your case. Nicely done.
