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The forgotten world

July 13, 2010
By montana PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
montana PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
41 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
cliche quotes I have are.....
I know, right? and..... Are you kidding me?

In the world around us
in the world around us

grass between our toes
sun shining on a dew covered rose

rain sinking into our skin
waves crashing in

snow coating our hair
galloping on a black mare

water rushing through a river
a lemon tree growing a sliver

In the world around us
in the world around us

The author's comments:
Another poem of mine prior to this peice, the recent gulf spill, and the horrible way our environment is being treated.

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on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:59 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This si so powerful!! i love it! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!