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Save Me

December 26, 2011
By hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau


save me the chorus. save me the world.
i need you like the stars up above.
save me the rhymes and save me the time your not alone because now we are together.
give me your ears look through my eyes
now you know the pain that i sing about.
save me the song save me the heartbreak now is the time to say that i can't break.
say your beautiful or say that your mine.
this isn't my design.
save me the chorus save me the world now is the time to give me your love and devotion.
our time is up
the time is now. stand your ground and don't look down.
give me your arms give me your soul.
now is the time to say i need your help.
here is the end
i am ready to face it
how about you.
this is the end, no way to go against it.
now my story is over
because this is all for you
i gave you the world but you threw it back
now its over and i am all gone


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on Jan. 5 2012 at 7:53 pm
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
27 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

thanks JD i really appreciate it

XCBVIA GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 12:19 pm
XCBVIA GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
NGU. Never give up.

Hey that was really good!

on Dec. 31 2011 at 11:29 am
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
27 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

thanks josika :)

butterfly123 said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 11:06 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! amazing piece!

on Dec. 29 2011 at 11:53 am
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
27 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

thank you wonder :)

on Dec. 29 2011 at 11:52 am
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Another really good peice of work. Nice. :)