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A Long Way Down

February 5, 2013
By Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Shes a daydreamer shes not good for much. All she does is dream of what she could become. What she doesn't realize is without doin anything now. It'll all start crumbling down.





Chorus: Its a long way down when you're high up in the clouds. Its a painful fall when you're dreamin you've got it all. Its a slowly fading memory when you open your eyes and finally see. Its a long way down.







Now shes 23 starin out the window dreamin about tomorrow. She was just a girl but now shes grown. To scared to try to achieve what she wants. So she pretends shes the movie star shes watchin now. She pretends shes the singer on the radio right now. Her life is goin by fast she hasn't realized it yet the lesson that is. (repeat chorus)







She cant stop cryin now cause shes seen the truth. But she knows shes got somethin to prove. So she'll make that dream come true. (repeat chorus)

© Cerys W., Marblehead, MA

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This is my very first song so please go easy on me.But please comment and put what you think.
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Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 15 2013 at 7:26 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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thanks :) i dont know if ill ever sing it but if i do ill let you know.
ash57999 SILVER said...
on Mar. 15 2013 at 5:24 pm
ash57999 SILVER, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
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I love this song!  It flows nicely and the word choice is great! 5 stars (now I want to hear you sing it! ^^ )
Diana101 GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2013 at 5:43 pm
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This was really good !  :)
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on Mar. 7 2013 at 6:07 pm
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I think this poem speaks on behalf of the whole world. Very relatble. Wonderful.
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on Feb. 23 2013 at 10:31 pm
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This is a good start - I'd fix the grammatical errors and then work on the melody a little. But the idea is really good and relatable.
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 1:00 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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K. Thanks :)
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 10:35 am
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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PIck a tune from a song you already know, then model your song after that. 
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2013 at 10:13 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Thanks. I'm still tryin to figure out the whole songwriting thing including the tune. Any tips?
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2013 at 10:07 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Really good, the tune was kinda hard to understand though. 
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2013 at 3:28 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Thanks :)  your work is really good too.
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 16 2013 at 3:23 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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I like this! I'd love to hear it to music, but even just from reading it I can tell that it is very good. :)
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:19 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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thanks. :)
Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:09 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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I loved it! 5 stars
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 9:18 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Thanks:)  I wasn't sure if it was good or not. 
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 8:22 pm
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I don't know much about how songs should sound (the rhythm) but your word choice and message was very powerful. Five stars!