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My World Has Fallen Apart

April 29, 2014
By CrazybutWicked PLATINUM, Alkol, West Virginia
CrazybutWicked PLATINUM, Alkol, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is like the sun, you can shut it out for a while but it will always be there.


My life, this way I feel, I'm ashamed to be living like a certain cloud of pain hovers above my broken heart. My soul is drouning in the rain. I feel just like these four walls around me are caving in and my world has fallen apart all at once I'm on my knees. My heart is dieing all over again! Oh!

I fight on and on for a better life. This monster deep inside digs at whats left of my sanity. Though I know I'm growing colder, I fight just one last time!

I hide mysely in the darkest corner, crying my life away with no tears falling I whisper to myself, "My life has fallen apart right at my feet and i struggle to survive, but this life is mine so I'll try just one more time today! Go!


The author's comments:
Just wrote this off the top of my head! Hope you like it!

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on May. 4 2015 at 9:02 am
CrazybutWicked PLATINUM, Alkol, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is like the sun, you can shut it out for a while but it will always be there.

Thank you both @JakeSmiles and @JessiBear777 for your comments and I whole heartedly apologize for not replying but I was in a placement phacility and could not reply. I thank you both for giving your opinions. ^_^

on May. 5 2014 at 5:49 pm
JakeSmiles BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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This... this is very good, extremely touching and well written 

on May. 1 2014 at 4:46 pm
JessiBear777 BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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I really like this! It reminds me of some things I have written; it's similar to my style of writing in a way. You can really feel the emotion behind the words. Even in the midst of heartache, your determination and strength stand firm and are unwavering. It's very inspiring.