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Will I ?

May 15, 2023
By noorn234 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
noorn234 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
" Winners focus on winning, Losers focus on winners " - Eric Thomas


Being his daughter,

Brings me pain 

My eyes water

I'm circling the drain 

 

Will I make it

Or Will I crack 

In the tub, I sit 

Boiling water down my back 

 

The cuts so deep 

I wince in pain 

I fall asleep 

With death on the brain 

 

My breathe so slow

My eyes feel light 

Please don't go 

Your future is bright. 

- Natasha Noor 


The author's comments:

This piece was a complete sonnet that I wrote when I was angry and vulnerable. This sonnet emphasizes a teenage girl who struggles to find a happy relationship point with her and her father. This also emphasizes the use of SH. I wrote this when I was very vulnerable and in a  manipulative mood, so this is kind of deep and dark. By reading this poem, please understand that If you relate to this, this poem was supposed to support one's mental stability and mental health, rather than encourage more discomfort to the current mood. I hope you enjoyed this, please let me know your feedback! Have a great day!


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