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March 11, 2010
By PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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&quot;When life hands you lemons, make apple juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.&quot; -Unknown<br /> &quot;The world is my pineapple. I just have to figure out a way past the prickly parts.&quot; -Me

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Who is this man? I do not know him, but he is beautiful. His hair is as dark as the moonless night, covering his head in soft, tousled curls. He has black, arched eyebrows, which give him an air of intelligence. A strong nose and jaw makes him look down-to-earth. His cheekbones are high, hinting at Native American ancestry. His tanned skin is like silk, without a mark or blemish. Some unknown humor quirks his curved lips into an adorably crooked grin.

It is his eyes that capture me. They are the most peculiar color, a deep violet, like liquid amethysts. Framed by long, thick, dark lashes, they draw me in until I am drowning in them. They are a thousand years old, though he is obviously not even close to that age. His solemn eyes show me sadness, disaster, and hardships, but also recognition, happiness, and hope. Who is this man? I do not know him, but I have a feeling I will.

© Matthew S., Sharon, MA

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This is a random article i had to write for as class. Hope u enjoy:)
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mudpuppy BRONZE said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 5:59 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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I know this is fiction, but the man that she is describing sound very handsome and mysterious. I eager to read more. :)
readaholic PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 6:34 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Interesting and nicely short!  Yum yum this is some good reading
weebnini DIAMOND said...
on May. 11 2010 at 11:53 pm
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i'm not one for descriptions and imagery. i don't really care actually because i'm more into the feeling of the story, but this piece is amazing. in it theres relation!! and imagery that makes you want to know and want to see! it's cool.:)
MO@TMS said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 2:33 pm
Impressive writing - very descriptive.  I think I might know this man if I saw him on the street.
PussnBoots GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 4:50 pm
PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life hands you lemons, make apple juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.&quot; -Unknown<br /> &quot;The world is my pineapple. I just have to figure out a way past the prickly parts.&quot; -Me

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Which mom? And it takes a while for the process to go through. I submitted another article, but it won't be posted for a while.
Third Mom said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 7:47 am
Well I am waiting for the next page, you truly have me on the edge of my seat.
PussnBoots GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:50 am
PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life hands you lemons, make apple juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.&quot; -Unknown<br /> &quot;The world is my pineapple. I just have to figure out a way past the prickly parts.&quot; -Me

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Probably will be writing more. Thanks for the comment! ;)
PussnBoots GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:45 am
PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life hands you lemons, make apple juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.&quot; -Unknown<br /> &quot;The world is my pineapple. I just have to figure out a way past the prickly parts.&quot; -Me

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I mean to mileymom24... clicked a wrong button... oops... :)
PussnBoots GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:43 am
PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life hands you lemons, make apple juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.&quot; -Unknown<br /> &quot;The world is my pineapple. I just have to figure out a way past the prickly parts.&quot; -Me

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That wold be nice. Thanks!!!
love2read said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:32 am
Amazing! The words are vivid and captivating. Hope to read more in the future.
mick said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 10:48 pm
Very talented young writer. Keep writing...I think we'll read more from in years to come. Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing
mileymom24 said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 2:26 pm
So creative and descriptive. My favorite that you have written. I love to share this one around for you. Keep writing!!
The Glamourista said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 4:33 pm
An extremely interesting, descriptive story. It made me feel as if I was also looking upon this man...excellent writing style! Keep it up!
PussnBoots GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 9:14 am
PussnBoots GOLD, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life hands you lemons, make apple juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.&quot; -Unknown<br /> &quot;The world is my pineapple. I just have to figure out a way past the prickly parts.&quot; -Me

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Thanks! I'm new, so i hope to be writing more...
poppabear said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 9:07 am
That's my girl! Keep writing!
OCPepsigirl said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:25 am
This was Very Nicely Written...Enjoyed Reading It What To Read More :)
mommabear said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:05 am
What a neat story!!!!