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like suffocating
April 11, 2010
i hate the feeling of virtigo
the spinning smothering feeling that wont stop.
everything is a memories and memories consist of blood.
I hate the feeling of dreams
the ones you know you cant accomplish
the ones you dont know why you dreamnt in the first place
i hate the feeling of the past
it haunts my sleep and wake
reminding me that i wasnt always this person
I hate the feeling of love
the sticky warmth that hangs in the air after kisses
and melts the world.
Sometimes its like suffocating
© Breanna Lea B., Richmond, VA
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This article has 2 comments.
"i hate.." All 'I's , that represent 'me' should be Capitalized, especially since it's at the beginning of a sentence. "dont" is "don't" same for "wasnt"; There are some things misspelled, Like "dreamnt" I think you mean "Dreamed".... Well that was just feedback, With all that fixed, It would be Excellent! Your writing was very unique, You just need to review before pending :D
music_lover PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 5:00 pm
Wow, that's really good. I like the emotions you display in your writing. Good job.
