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Forbidden Love [part 2]

June 12, 2009
By okeydokey SILVER, Cle Elum, Washington
okeydokey SILVER, Cle Elum, Washington
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“Mom, I don't really want to go to boarding school.”

“What? No, honey, you're just kidding. Of course you want to go.”

“Um... no. I don't.”

There was silence on the other line. I didn't know what to do, so I asked, “”

“No no no no no! You are staying in that bloody school, and you are going to like it, and you are only going to come home for christmas and easter! Young lady, am I clear?!”
I shouldn't have said anything.

“Yeah, mom. But just so you know, I didn't want to come home either.”

I hung up the phone before my old-fashioned mother could go on another tangent about how any true lady will learn from a good school blah blah blah. Screw this. I thought. I'm getting out of here, and there's nothing she can do about it. I decided right then and there that as soon as the semester was over [a week from now] I was going to get away from this ginormous building, with it's old-as-dirt teachers, and stupid rules.


I let out a sigh as Cody texted me again. He could make it seem like all my problems were so far away sometimes.

Yeah. I do. I'll B there soon.




I giggled at the warm and fuzzy feeling only he could give me.

I love you too.

Not bothering to take off my soccer tank from earlier, I changed into some basketball shorts and shrugged on a sweatshirt. Peeking outside to see if the dorm monitor, Claire, was watching, I bolted across the hallway and down the short flight of stairs, through the lobby [past a late-night touchy-feely couple], down a much longer flight of stairs, through one set of double doors, past a mini arcade / bubble gum paradise, and out another door into the refreshing midnight air of June. Taking a single deep breath to calm me, I took off my sweatshirt, hid it in my favorite trap door in the school, and took off for the tree that hangs over both sides of our fence, making a quick getaway conveniently easy.

Thud! My sneakers slapped onto the pavement, and I hit the ground running. I couldn't wait to see Cody.

Past Second Street. Past Nevada Avenue. Past North Oak Road. Into the parking lot of Starbucks I ran. I could see a silhouette standing casually by the door. I figured it was Cody, so I jogged up to him, and hugged him quickly. It just started to get awkward when his face came out of the shadows, and it wasn't Cody's.

“Whoa, I'm sorry. I thought you were my boyfriend. Sorry.”

The guy was just a little taller than me. He had messy dirty-blonde hair, small blue eyes, and a strong jawline. He looked strong through his ribbed maroon muscle shirt. I just started to turn around and grab the door handle where Cody was probably waiting inside, when the dude grabbed my waist, and dragged me back against the wall.

“Hey, man. I said I was sorry. I don't even know you, please don't carry on.”

“I'm not gonna hit you or anything.” His voice was really deep and clear. He was leaning against the wall, a little close to where i was standing, just against the wall connected to it to make an inward corner.

“Uh... ok, that's great, but you, like, back of a little? I've got personal space issues.” I tried to inch him backwards with my hand.

“You didn't seem to have personal space issues earlier.” He replied, ignoring my hand trying to shoo him off.

“Dude, that's with my fricking boyfriend!” I tried to push him, but i couldn't make him budge. Not even the littlest bit.

“Well then, just pretend I'm your boyfriend.” His mouth twisted into a smile, as he grabbed my hand and pulled me toward him. My first instinctual thought was, Aw, crap! The school pervert from last month has friends!

I spoke too soon. I guess what he did was better but worse than the pervert. He suddenly had a black garbage bag that came out of nowhere, dumped it over my head, and picked me up like a sack of potatoes over his shoulder. I instantly started screaming for all to hear. About 20 paces away, after a ton of complaining from him, I was plopped back onto my feet and could see the light of day again.

“Now, you listen here. You will shut up and cooperate, or I will make you.” He pointed his finger at me, and got reaaaal close to my face.

I stood my ground. Crossed arms, balanced on one food, sarcastic look on my face, I was ready for anything. Except a surprise attack.

I was grabbed from behind, again. By the waist, again. No garbage bags now, this dude never turned me around to look at him. Which sucked, cause he tied my hands together with what felt like duct tape, tripped me so I fell over, and then tied my feet as well.

So here I was, sitting on my butt, eyes, mouth, hands and feet all out of order. The only thing I could do in the back seat of that beat-down beamer was listen to what the two guys were saying, which was pointless.

“I saw her yesterday,” said Ugly-butt [that's what I call him].

“Who, Sara?”

“Yeah, and she was looking hot-a** as usual.”

“Dude, you're obsessed over the girl.”

“Am not. I just love her.”

“Am too.” The guy I didn't see punched Ugly-butt . I could practically imagine the storm brewing.

Ugly-butt kicked No-face. No-face hit Ugly-butt harder. Ugly-butt let go of the wheel and started to attack No-face. They didn't notice it, but I could feel the car starting to swerve off of the highway. Crap! How do I get them to pay attention to the road? How do I--

OOFF!! The car ran smack into a tree. I still couldn't see anything, but I could hear loud and clear the front end scrunch like an accordion. I rolled off of the seat and onto the floor from the impact. The dudes were silent for a moment, and then started going at each other again, saying stuff like, “This is your fault!” “No, you're the one who wasn't watching the road!” “You're the one who made me!” etc.... Meanwhile, I was working on getting the duct tape off of my hands. Once I did that, my feet were next.

Slowly, slowly, slowly towards the door, slowly, slow-ooh! There's the door handle. Ok. Slowly pull it, slowly, slowly, don't let it be loud enough to click. Now, slowly open the door, inch towards the door slowly, very slowly... now RUN!!!

I bolted out the door as quick as possible. I felt like the wind, running away from that car. I didn't look back to see if they had noticed I was gone, but I heard heavy footsteps. That just made me try and run faster. I've played soccer for eight years! He can't catch me! I thought while my sneakers slapped against the nicely paved road. Down the very centre I bolted, never slowing down. I imagined the soccer ball between my feet. Steadily, the footsteps grew softer, and after a while I paused to listen. I didn't hear anything other than birds chirping now. I had lost the perverts! I quickly pulled out my phone to call someone, anyone. Cody, my mom, or 911? I wondered. Well, 911 would be here pretty quick. They probably have a tracking system, and they would put the dudes behind bars. Cody would be the most emotional help to me right now, and he has a truck. My mom, is well... my mom. There's nothing else to it. She's my mom.

I decided to call 911 first, and while i was sitting in the medic, I would call Cody and my mom. Slowing to a casual walk on the side of the road, I dialed the three numbers.

“Nine-one-one. What's your emergency?” A lady's voice came over the speaker. She sounded too calm to be talking for a medic hotline.

“I've been kidnapped. I escaped the people, and I'm walking on a road right now. I need someone to come get me because I have no idea where I am.” I realized I spoke too calmly to be talking to a medic hotline.

“Ok, our gps systems are tracking your cell phone now. An ambulance should be there shortly.”

“Thanks a lot.” I smiled. I would be ok.

“You're very welcome, miss. Glad to be of service. Do you want me to stay on the line with you until the vehicle arrives?”

“No thanks. Am I allowed to walk, or should I sit in one spot while I wait?”

“You can walk if you like. Bye now.”


I walked silently past a tree stump. I counted the rings for a little bit, got bored after I passed 26, and walked again. The brisk air felt so nice on my arms, legs and face. I closed my eyes and tilted my head toward the stars. I opened them, and saw a beautiful night sky. The moon was a crescent, the stars were in groups and they shone like little nightlights.

I just realized I turned my phone off when I was about to text Cody. Listening to the little tune it made when turning on, there were eleven text messages popping up. Cody, I love you too. I thought and smiled. I scanned through the first. The list read,












I cried when I read those. While, and after. Cody loves me so much, I thought.

I heard a siren from behind me. Yes! The ambulance! Yes yes yes!!

I stopped and stood to the side of the road while the medic stopped and people rushed out. Cody jumped out of the back and ran to me. I embraced him in such a wonderful kiss that my head spun and almost unscrewed itself off of my neck. When we finally pulled apart, I whispered in Cody's ear, “I love you too. I always will.”

We walked back to the medic, where my mom and best friend, Liz, were sitting inside. A smile broke across my face as I ran and hugged them. I pulled away quickly, and looked my mom in the eye. “I have a boyfriend. His name is Cody. We are in love with each other. Even though we aren't allowed to be together, we are anyway. There is nothing you can do.”

“I know. That's why I already accepted Cody. He seems like a good guy anyway.” My mom smiled warmly. This was the first time she actually accepted what I did and wanted to do. “Your love isn't so forbidden anymore.”

“No. No it's not.” Cody turned me toward him and pulled me into another embrace. Sweet, goodness rushed into me like a tidal wave. Flames erupted through my body, and I loved it.

When I got home that night, I wrote in my journal. Just like every night. With no exceptions.

I will never forget what happened tonight. Two guys kidnapped me on my way to starbucks, took me into a car and then drove the car into a tree, I got away, I got picked up by an ambulance, my mom accepted that I love Cody, and now my life is normal again! Except for the fact that Cody and I are GETTING MARRIED IN TWO MONTHS!!!!! He popped the question when he was with me in my dorm. We're going searching for wedding bands tomorrow. My mom is gonna supply all the money that we don't have and need for them, my dress, his tux, everything!!! I can't believe it! I'm getting married to my love!!!! happy endings do exist!!!!!!!!! Until tomorrow, I leave to my bed. My normal, perfectly normal bed. Ahhhhhhhhhhh. I'm out. =)

Meanwhile, Someone Perched On A Bench Outside Watched Her Every Move...

The author's comments:
I got a little off-topic while working on the climax, but i wrapped it up at the end. i still think it's very good.

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on May. 30 2011 at 9:13 pm
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YOU HAVE TO FINISH THE STORY!!!!! I can't wait to read more!!!

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on Mar. 3 2011 at 7:26 pm
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i loved it the best thing i ever read cant wait for the next one.

on Dec. 27 2010 at 10:06 pm
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write more get started now! luv this!

on Dec. 10 2010 at 9:11 pm
DreamALittleDreamOfMe GOLD, Sea Cliff, New York
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"HA!!!! wait, i don't get it...."

Not really a fan of this..... Too cliche... "happy endings do exist!!" really? if you avoided cliche and it would have been LOADS better. I'm not hating, Iactually like the plot, but you obviously didn't finish editing this one.

LastChapter said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 4:24 pm
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(couldn't think of anything better at the time) "Take the first step in faith. You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step."-Dr.Martin Luther King Jr.

i thought you had a nice plot with great suspense and a sweet love story, but some parts just felt rushed. i can relate, like when you have such a great idea you just want it all down in black and white before you remember that delicious sandwich in the fridge and *POOF* its gone! but that's what editing is for! some parts, like when the mother says that she understands and respects her daughter's choices, it just seemed to abrupt and unsupported based on what you previously implied the mother-daughter relationship to be. perhaps a tear-wrenching alliance with the two after they meet after the escaped kidnapping would better bond them? idk, and its your story, but its a great plot, so i'd hate to see a few sour notes ruin such a sweet story.

alibi SILVER said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 6:05 pm
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you have a lot of talent with writing!!! please dont stop!!! is there a part 3???

Amaria GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 8:34 pm
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That was a really great story!! wow i can't wait to find out what happens next. cuz it is a series right??

on Sep. 30 2010 at 4:25 pm
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Greater good? I am your wife. I am the greatest good you are ever gonna get!

This was sooo good!  I had to read it in sections because I was doing homework, and when no one was looking, I read it!  I had to stop whenever someone came in  the room.  That just goes to show how much suspense there is!  I hope there's a part thre!!!!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 3:18 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

that actually works out really good, and i have many ideas going
jus hope it works!! (: thnx so much
there will b a story soon!!~~

on Aug. 23 2010 at 1:09 am
okeydokey SILVER, Cle Elum, Washington
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well, all you've gotta do is make the plotline different. maybe even make the vampire a girl, don't have her be in a family, let her meet a guy, let her keep it a secret and then him catch her eating one day, and... well, i don't wanna give it away to myself. just be imaginative, it'll work out just fine:)

on Aug. 21 2010 at 8:52 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

i will post a story about that, but from an awesome writters point of view, how can i not make it a knock off??? how can it be original???
Imma try writting the story very soon :)

on Aug. 21 2010 at 12:31 am
okeydokey SILVER, Cle Elum, Washington
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of course! if you mix the vampire bit and the love bit, you could come out with an interesting story! the only word of caution i have to say about the vampire/love theme, is that some people will think it's a knockoff of Twilight or Vampire Diaries. to avoid that, try and make it as original as possible. have fun!

on Aug. 20 2010 at 10:35 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

awesome :) thanks so much for the help!
The main things i like to write bout are vampires, and love stories right now, i know its probably weird, but its pretty fun
Do u think i shuld  try a story???

on Aug. 20 2010 at 9:00 pm
okeydokey SILVER, Cle Elum, Washington
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the way i get inspiration for stories is reading others that i like. sometimes a single word pops out and i think of a story, sometimes it's something someone says, or sometimes it's my own imagination!

i suggest you read the kind of stories you want to write about, and while you're reading you'll get a feel of the style you want to write, and when you get an idea for a story, jot it down quickly before you lose it! then, whenever you want, you can look back on that story main idea and elaborate on it. :)

on Aug. 19 2010 at 12:32 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
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"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

you are such a good writter! i really want to try to make a story, but i dont know how to start one
i really enjoy writting stories, n i would like to ask someones whose good :) haha!

on Aug. 19 2010 at 2:50 am
okeydokey SILVER, Cle Elum, Washington
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 thanks very much, i'm so glad you enjoyed them. there will not be another part, but since another reader was so hooked they needed some sort of ending, i winged it and posted a brief statement of the "next part". it's in the comments below, feel free to read! :)

on Aug. 17 2010 at 6:04 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

this is such a good story!!!
Is there going to be another part???
I enjoyed both parts so much!!!
Keep writting, your great~

Maranda SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:56 pm
Maranda SILVER, East Haddam, Connecticut
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Not gonna lie,

this gave my goosebumps. Reallyyyy great story =)

on Jun. 12 2010 at 11:18 pm
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This is so great!  You've definitely got talent!  And thanks for commenting on my article:)

on May. 21 2010 at 10:10 am
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this is the best!!! Keep writing!!!