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Princess of Flowers

March 30, 2011
By Jesusisalive BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
Jesusisalive BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments

The wind whispered softly. The wild flowers swayed gently in the breeze as I danced

among them. I laughed aloud as colorful petals filled the air. They were dancing with me.

Gracefully raising my arms, I swayed back and forth as wheat in the wind. Petals landed

softly in my beech nut color locks, forming a crown. I was a flower princess.

The wind rustled my hair, and the petals floated away. Away, far away, they went. I

danced for them. I danced to their glory and beauty.

Hair windblown, cheeks flushed, I ran swiftly after them. They were going home and I

with them.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:06 am
LifeIsPoetry PLATINUM, Kapowsin, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing."
– Mother Teresa

I like the way this is organized- somewhere between a poem and a story. Your imagery and word choice is great! Keep writing!

on Jul. 28 2011 at 6:16 pm
Jesusisalive BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments
Sometimes my writind doesn't neccessarily have a lot of meaning. It was just written from inspiration or something. Thanks for your comment though. :)

Kailey4 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:15 pm
Kailey4 BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Né io pitorre" - Michelangelo

This is really beautiful!! I like the spacing, and even thought I don't completely undertand it, I like the style. I like to write things like this, too:)