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The Moon

August 26, 2011
By TimeslipOracle BRONZE, ., Other
TimeslipOracle BRONZE, ., Other
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Favorite Quote:
You'll commit suicide trying to read my mind

The moon is obliterated, a ball literally reduced to nothingness.
A waft of smoke lurks in the background.
Time engulfed in the stillness.
Dolor (spirit of pain) waits in anticipation, its arms wrap around you, suffocating you in a sickening calm manner.
Your body shuts down, your senses scatter across the floor and your eyes have lost all control.

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Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 1:58 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

Love this! You should try poetry too!

anonomys said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 8:24 am
nice yet simple