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Deep Waters
April 6, 2009
The intensity of his ocean blue eyes shocked me...i couldnt move or think...let alone breathe.I felt the word rush out of my mouth...too fast,too quickly to even believe that i was actually saying it..."Forever"
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This article has 8 comments.
Veritytrue SILVER said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 11:26 pm
Great start! I can totally see this as an intro to a story! I would definately expand on this if I were you. Good job!
Lifesbutadream BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 6:50 pm
You know what, Just put it on here....id love to read it(=
Lifesbutadream BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2009 at 6:30 am
Honestly, im a sucker for the romance stories. i think this sounds good...keep going at it, i want to see what happens next. go ahead keep writing it.
