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HARRY POTTER CONTINUED

January 8, 2011
By TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
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Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"


Summary:

This starts right after the last page of the book but before the epilogue. This talks about all the things that happened in between them finishing Voldemort and then as adults. Included: How everyone gets married, the kids of course, and the fast-paced adventure of finding and capturing the remaining Death Eaters and followers.


Kristin S.

HARRY POTTER CONTINUED


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on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:45 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
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Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

yea :D :D :D :D :D :D

on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:44 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

:D :D :D :D :D :D

on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:43 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

:D :D :D :D :D :D

on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:42 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

:D :D :D :D :D :D

on Aug. 14 2011 at 7:53 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Yeahh I know! lol I'm going to put it in later. :) but honestly thank you so much for taking the time to read! :D

on Aug. 14 2011 at 7:03 pm
BellaTrixster, Fort Richardson, Alaska
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We're taking turns now? I think it should be Eric's personally.

You're very welcome!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 6:48 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

I LOVE HARRY POTTER TOO!!!!!!!!! And thanks so much I'll check it out ASAP :)

on Aug. 14 2011 at 6:47 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thank you so much!!!!! :)

OKgirl said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 4:07 pm
You know, the spell she put on her parents to make them forget. She said in the seventh one that she would track them down and lift the spell.

on Aug. 8 2011 at 11:18 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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I LOVE HARRY POTTER!!! wow that was sooo kewl! I very nice piece of work! great job! I just posted a new story i wrote called: Alien invasion series book one: the caller. If any of u had time please go check it out and post feedback and comments. It would be much appreciated! Thanks! and keep writing everyone! :)(:

on Aug. 4 2011 at 11:28 pm
BellaTrixster, Fort Richardson, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
We're taking turns now? I think it should be Eric's personally.

It's really good!!! Keep writing! I love it!!! And I love the Harry Potter series, so it was good to see someone who could write closely to J.K. Rowling! Good luck! And keep a writing!!!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:47 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Oh god you're right. Thank you!!!!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:47 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Yeah, you're right. It'd make the story flow a bit better. And I kinda had to put in the random Malfoy scene (sorry!) because it's basically the main lead in to what they're going to do next. But thanks for taking the time to read! I really appreciate it and stay posted in for more soon! :)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:37 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Griphook died in the series!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:15 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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I'm only about halfway though but I love it! Some things I believe need tending to:

1) the dialogue is sketchy at times. Maybe you should try saying who says lot a little more often.

2) when characters have thoughts, it'd be less confusing if you clarified whose thoughts they were and maybe put them in some sort of quotations?

3) I just finished reading the chapter with Malfoy and I think he random appearing was awkward and how he just openly discussed the Death Eaters with Harry without finding some sort of positive ground in which Harry would definetely not turn him in. 

 

Well that's all I've got for now! I'm going to keep on reading because I think it's marvelous. Good luck with the rest of your writing!


on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:19 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thanks so much! (: and I will

cathy1998 said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:21 am
this is amazing u writing is great next chapter please

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:24 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Lift the spell? What spell...? Lol

 

But thanks so much, I will!


on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:23 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thank you so much! I think you'll love the wedding :)

OKgirl said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:41 am
Hold on, I thought Hermione was going to lift the spell after Voldemort's downfall. But other than that, the passion was amazing and really moving. I really loved it and please continue writing!