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The Robinson Boys
Summary:
“Are you Sabrina Davis?” A man asked, and my smile vanished.
“The one and only,” I replied, wondering what this random dude wanted from me.
“Sabrina, I’m sorry, but your parent’s got in a wreck.”
Nievia
The Robinson Boys
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This is a graet idea for a story! I ilove it! But...you have a couple problems. Your voice and your pacing.
Voice: You write like you speak. Its conversational (which is great when interacting with your reader), but when you're telling us a story, conversation isn't as important as background. Dialogue is important, but where your characters are and who your characters are shuold never fall to the wayside.
Pacing: You're excited about your story. You want to show us what's next, but hey! I want to know what is happening now. Don't let details fall to the wayside in attempts to push the plot line along. Sure, you'll finish, but you'll be left with LARGE holes. Ex: Sabrina leaves the hospital without stitches? Mr. & Mrs. Robinson are okay with the murder attempt in their home? <--- These are you holes! Don't be afraid or too hurried to fill them!!
Over all, this was a great story and I want to know more! Work on filling your holes and keep up the good work!
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