Unwanted | Teen Ink


October 4, 2009
By el-oh-el PLATINUM, Maloney Gardens, Other
el-oh-el PLATINUM, Maloney Gardens, Other
28 articles 14 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, and fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? You are a child of God. Your playing small doesn't serve the world. There's nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine, as children do. We are born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us, it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others.
-Marianne Williamson

I feel like feces in a toilet
unwanted and flushed away
like a rotten egg; scorned
cracked and then thrown away
maybe even like spoiled milk
one taste and i make you sick;
then i'm thrown away
i'm like a bugger in your nose
you just got to get rid of me
like pigeon poop
you wouldn't want me to touch you
it's funny
because to me, you're
like a million bucks
i'll want you all the days of my life
but to you;
i'm just a tissue
that you use
and then,

The author's comments:
Yes I do understand that I have some self esteem issues

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

on Oct. 14 2009 at 12:58 am
LovelyLynn BRONZE, Brea, California
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is made for another in this world"

It was okay, but don't get me wrong I like it, except the whole comparisons kind of discusted me, not all of them. just the first one, I had a mental picture. haha you're very good at writing, keep up the good work dollface!(:

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 10:11 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."

OMG this is brilliant and it is comedic whether you meant it to be or not and it has EXCELLENT comparisons and cool ending. I love it. KEEP writing.